::Modeliste 2::

[iseedeadpeople554]

my order:
1. Kerimina
2. Liselle
3. Sykalo
4. Bootz(me)
5. Nikki
6. Ashley
7. Codi and Juji
9.Gormorca

[thelebmsproduction]

My Order-
1. Nikki
2. Bootz
3. Ashley
4. Gormorca (Me)
5. Codi
6. Kerimina
7. Liselle
9.Sykalo

[kebin65]

I got george's comments, so panel should be up today. However, since it's July 4th, I'm not making any promises ;D

[sailorsally]

Aww, can we please have panel? ^_^

Not all of us are American ya know. (I am but that's beside the point lol)

[sailorsally]

Jul 4, 2009 4:32:46 GMT -6 chaddie said:

1. i dont have an editor that will allow me to recolor it and make it look good.

Then... you're not going to make it very far in this contest. Download GIMP or Paint.NET (they're free) because just about everyone else here knows how to edit stuff. Besides, in the final 2 you HAVE to edit your own designs; it says so in the rules.

[kebin65]

Jul 4, 2009 10:16:17 GMT -6 sailorsally said:

Jul 4, 2009 4:32:46 GMT -6 chaddie said:

1. i dont have an editor that will allow me to recolor it and make it look good.

Then... you're not going to make it very far in this contest. Download GIMP or Paint.NET (they're free) because just about everyone else here knows how to edit stuff. Besides, in the final 2 you HAVE to edit your own designs; it says so in the rules.

I MAY change that rule, because a lot of people here do not know how to edit ;D

And I just got back from a July 4th thing, so I'll start working on panel.

[chaddie]

i have Paint.Net and it is with lack of better words ... Crappy.

whats with all the hate towards me sailorsally :/

[kebin65]

::Panel #1::

Tule: Welcome to your first panel designers! You will each be critiqued by both Marcus and I, and by the end of the night, one of you will not be making it through to the next round. Before we begin, let me go over the prizes that one of you will walk away with

-A 4 page spread in eL Magazine to display your designs
-$500 CDF
-$250 CDF store credits to Keb's Graphix n More
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::Marcus [george]::

Ashley :: I'm pretty sure you were going for a "potato sack" style dress, but unfortunately this design falls flat. The lengths are all wrong! If you had cut it off just above the knees and added a waist belt it would have looked so much more high fashion. I don't really understand the sprinkles of white material either, it feels like you misunderstood the brief and thought you HAD to use both black amd white colours when your design could have been just black.

Bootz :: It really doesn't get much more uncordinated than this. You started with a polka-dot push up bikini top, which is well constructed. However, you then made some hideous "boyfriends' undies" inspired bottoms that look faded and ill-fitting. In all honesty I don't know what would have saved this design because it's horrendous. You also have to realise that we're looking at the whole outfit which includes shoes. Those shoes are dull and boring, they don't compliment the outfit at all

Codi :: I have to admit this is one of the better swimsuits walking down this runway today. It's still uncordinated but your measurements are perfect. The model doesn't look like she's had an overnight boob job like on Juji's design, which is a good thing. The colour's are way too distracting though. You should have stuck with all black then it really would have made your outfit look expensive.

Gormorca :: To be burtally honest Gormorca, I have no idea what type of outfit you were designing, is it casual? Evening wear? Who knows! My biggest problem is definitely the top, no top should ever come above the belly button. It looks cheap and tacky. I think the trousers would have looked so much more appealing if they were slim fitted to show off your models amazonian legs. Finally, you didn't fully listen to the brief I'm afraid. There's two pieces of gold on your outfit and we said only black & white!

Juji :: I mentioned earlier about how your model looks like Pamela Anderson, and that's mainly because the upper "t-shirt" design is way too tight, I'm surprised she can breath! It's really not flattering which is a shame because the bottom part (though similar to Codi's design) is really nice. My biggest problem comes with your lack of shoes. NEVER send a model down a catwalk with no shoes, even with swimwear some flip flops would be be better than nothing.

Kerimina :: For a first design this is impressive! Your use of layering in the bottom of the T-shirt to create that skirt look is lovely. I think the bow really gives off the fashion element of this task aswell. To add even more perfection to your design you puffed out the sleeves which looks really cute! Finally, I would have preffered the leggings to be all white but they do still look good on your design.

Liselle :: Oh Liselle you have outdone yourself! Summer dresses are in this season and the one you created is perfect. The bustier design instead of straps is really high fashion and I love how you used pattern instead of just black and white staple colours like the other designers. Much like Kerimina your layering is perfect and you've thought about the whole outfit as we can see due to your inclusion of that little white bangle which finishes your stunning design!

Nikki :: First of all, I like how you opted for the strapless shirt design, it looks great on your model. However, I really wish the shirt was fitted, it almost looks like you used to much material. The bottom part is a big problem for me I'm afraid, the trousers really should have been full length and much thinner to emphasise your models' great proportions. I just don't see anything high fashion about this outfit, I know you were designing a casual look but there still should have been a hint of something amazing.

Sykalo :: "Punk rocker at it's best" is what I like to call this design Sykalo! The one sleeve design of your top is really edgy and I think finishing it off with chains was a perfect idea. I'm so glad you used denim for the crop trousers as well it still gives off that punk vibe while staying true to its fashion heritage. The chain belt is once again a perfect idea (and very reminiscent of Vivienne Westwood). I'm loving this design and can't wait to see what else you produce.

::Tule [kebin65]::

Ashley :: I don't like this, Ashley. Firstly, I must say that the make up does not work at all. It is way too much and it's just not very fitting with the design. It really distracts me from the design. In contrast, the outfit is way too simple. I don't like the tightness of the design, as well as the length.

Bootz :: I'm not a fan of this, Bootz. Your top looks great, but I don't think it looks great with that particular bottom piece. I think my biggest issue are those shoes! Did you go to the Netherlands and get yourself a pair of black clogs? Are those what those are? Cause they just look so thick and so bulky! They don't look sexy! They lack structure. I'm sorry, but the ok bottom and the dreadful shoes ruined the outfit for me.

Codi :: Ok now I'm gonna have a hard time judging your outfit, cause Bootz' looks so similar! But I have to say I like your design more. I think that the top and bottom in your design go together pretty well, although I would've made the top a darker shade. And thank you for choosing better shoes, cause if you'd also gone for clogs I would've gone off on you too. However, it is important for a designer to be original and different, and the fact that it looks so similar to Bootz shows you need to improve on that.

Gormorca :: I'm not a big fan of this design, Gormorca. It sort of contradicts itself. The top is so "trashy", yet your pants look more professional and your shoes look like...something my dad would wear to the office! Are those loafers?? I just don't like this. As Marcus already stated, I don't think you should've gone near that top. It is just cheap, and I would never see it in a high fashion fashion show. I don't like the shape of the pants. They are way too baggy to go with a top like that. And I don't even wanna go into talking about those shoes. I'm sorry. I hate those shoes.

Juji :: I think this is the best swimsuit design when it comes to uniqueness, but that's not really saying much. I don't like the fact that the top almost looks like a t-shirt. On the beach, you want to show off your body, but to be honest it just looks like this top is hiding your model's body. I would've gone for something sexier. Other than that, the top goes well with the bottom. It's overall still an average design for me, though.

Kerimina :: Finally, a design I really like! I think this is a gorgeous outfit. I think you put all the colors in the right place and made them really work together. I absolutely love the shape of the outfit, and I think that the leggings and the vest both jazzed the outfit up and made it unique. You were assigned formal-wear, and although this isn't your ordinary ballgown, I can still see this being worn to a formal event.

Liselle :: Ahhh, stunning. I really like this, Liselle. The fact that you went for this checkered pattern really makes this design stand out for me. As Marcus already pointed out, the layering is brilliant. I love that portion of your design. It really enhances the dress. I also LOVE those shoes. The bracelet, in my opinion, sorta looks cheap, although it does fit with the design. Brilliant design, Liselle. Definitely one of the best.

Nikki :: It's a very beautiful design, Nikki. I don't think this was the best top you could've chosen, and if it wasn't for the black and white sash and the revealing shoulders, it would look awful, because the top is very baggy, especially the sleeve. But other than that, I really don't have much to critique. I think you did a great job!

Sykalo :: One of the best designs this week. I LOVE this edgy, punk look you went for with your design. I'm a really huge fan of the material you used for this. I think the best part of this design would be that top. I think it is very well constructed. The shape is unique and different, yet fashionable. Everything works in this design. Good job!

Tule: Marcus and I will deliberate, and when we return we will announce which one of you did not make the cut.

[kebin65]

Jul 5, 2009 2:12:59 GMT -6 chaddie said:

i have Paint.Net and it is with lack of better words ... Crappy.

whats with all the hate towards me sailorsally :/

I don't think she's hating you, just helping you ;D

And if I'm not mistaken, all sally has is PAINT.NET too.

[kebin65]

::Elimination #1::

Tule: 9 designers stand before me, but only 8 designers are going on. Those 8 will continue on the journey of hopefully becoming the Modeliste.

First name I will call...































Liselle
Marcus and I LOVED your design. Congratulations.






























Sykalo





















Keriminia




























Nikki





















Codi

























Gormorca























Juji

Will Ashley and Bootz please step forward?

Both of you are here for the same reason; you both turned in poor designs that I'm sorry to say that Marcus and I are both disappointed in. However, only one of you will get to prove that you in fact do have the potential to become the Modeliste...





































So don't disappointed us again.

Ashley and Bootz, you are both moving on. It has been decided that one week is not enough to see your true potential, and that you both need second chances.

Bootz, you would have been going home if we were to eliminate someone this week, so you really need to step it up.

However, next week will be a double elimination, so all of you need to work hard. Your call-out order from this week will be averaged in with next week's to determine which two do not make it.

[popcorn5679]

Thank kevin still learn

[alesch1919]

Yeah for 1st call-out can't wait for round 2

[midnightlemur]

Oh wow alot of good designs this week congrats Alesch I'm jealous haha 3rd Callout isn't bad though.

[midnightlemur]

My Callout would've been
1.Liselle
2.Nikki
3.Myself
4.Sykalo
5.Gormorca
6.Codi
7.Boots
8.Ashley
9.Juji(Late)

[sntmrockz]

Yeah I love Liselle's! Could you use guest judge for next week so I could judge?